Our First Pitch

Me, Rebecca and Dean presented our treatment to Mr.Hood, explaining our ideas as we went through. We the decided that this idea would too confusing and some people may not understand the idea of our story, we then together created a different plot which is easier to understand
and create.


Feedback- after listening to all the feedback we recieved and realising it would prove more difficult than we had first imagined, we have had a long discussion about it we have decided to no longer carry on with this idea so we have thought of another.